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Post by Shiningami on Oct 26, 2006 15:02:33 GMT -8
Falling Apart
Everything has turned to dust Dreams shattered, hopes lost Even my sword has begun to rust It's all falling apart
Those I thought I loved left My heart is broken and bleeding I am falling apart at best What else is there left to live for?
I posed a question, and what I got was loss Too many things I have thought My heart seems like just another thing to toss But, alas, it is all falling apart
I don't want to the world to see me They will never understand Things are falling apart, see? Everything is made to be broken
I will never know why I am like this Perhaps I should never ask Blast my soul, for my heart will always be his All around me, things are falling apart.
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Post by xander46 on Oct 30, 2006 4:39:45 GMT -8
*claps* very good. Very well put together. I enjoyed your poem. It describes how I feel sometimes, but thats a rare feeling. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more. ^_^
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